Thursday, November 4, 2021

Tuhituhi: Persuasive writing Should everyone have to do cross country?

 This is why you should not go on cross country because it can get hot 


the teacher says you have to do it if the kids are not carerful and they 


go on the rod because they want to get in the front of the lin and the 


cars can run them ofter it can be not fun for sum people. Little kids 


can fall and cut them salfe because of the glass and when that 


Happens they cry because there blood is coming out of them and for 


Me dogs if one got out i am going to run for my life when i get hot i 


get dehybratino and when you are on the croosscountry you you get 


Dehybatino you are running for a long time and you get sore legs soo 


Mane kids gets injured and then they go to the sick bay and in the end 


You can not win if you are not good at running 


3 comments:

  1. Hi Sione,
    Nice Piece of writing you got there. This reminds my of cross country. Maybe next time you could check your spelling.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Good Job Cool LONG WORK YA KNOW
    good job mate:)

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hey Sione This is such a grate piece persuasive writing. I really love how you got all the facts but I think you should go back reread your writing, other than that you have done a good job.

    ReplyDelete